"Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project"

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Operation Eagle Eye was Pakistan army strongest mission in FATA which is federally administered tribe area for purpose of capturing a terrorist leader.SSG is special services group whose leader is major Ali and his task was infiltration of terrorist hideout.

In this operation they utilized drones as well as special goggles which were used to see at night time for gathering intel as well for navigating treacherous terrian.As Major Ali team and he himself approached hideout they all were stumbling at a hidden bunker in which there were some communication gadgets as well as documents find out which were also encrypted.

In operation eagle eye there was also a minor error while navigating due to which major Ali team trapped in booby area.Major Ali and their team was fortunate because their perfect training and reflexes protected them from any sort of harm.Encrypted documents during this operation disclosed a fact that terrorist leader is planning an attack at major Pakistan's city.

Special services group team struggled after this fact for devising a plan for apprehending leader of terrorist and preventing them from attack.The time when they closed ,make matter more and more tense.Leader of terrorist felt that he is surrounded and now forced for detonating a bomb.

Major Ali incredible words to terrorist leader was that;

You should surrender!You have been surrounded

Upon that leader sneered and said;

You will never take me alive!

It was really a most daring move when major Ali along with his team breached hideout to overpower leader of terrorist as well as his accomplices.His team defused bomb which successfully saved a lot of innocent people lives.

Finally operation eagle was a successful operation which dealt major blow to organizations of terrorist and in that operation Major Ali and his team members who were well trained were real heroes and that's the reason tha their bravery, logical and strategic thinking saved a lot o people and now they all are remembered and will be remembered for rest of time in history of Pakistan.

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In conclusion my story is highlighting bravery and skill of army of Pakistan especially skills of special services group SSG that reflected that how much they have expertise in counter terrorism operations through their attack on terrorist leader and booby trapped area made this story more suspensible, interesting and memorable.

I want to invite @jannat12,@chant,@fombae,@sduttaskitchen

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project

Dear @destinydreamer, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4/5Satisfactory
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Excellent
Presentation0.75/1Good
My observation0.75/1You kept the action going from start to finish, but it didn't follow the contest's intended arc of "office mates uncovering a hidden truth."
Total8.5/10

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  • You stepped away from the contest's actual theme. The absence of an office environment, a company project, and the "worldwide fame" ending puts you off-brief.

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