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RE: With the best intentions - My short story for Finish The Story Contest - Week #67

in #contest6 years ago

Wow, a different ending. Being host to a parasite is such a frightening affair. And yet she accepted it without knowing what she was getting into. Too late from the looks of it.

Of course, she could end up becoming a superhuman or superbeing, which is worth the effort. So your ending does leave some hope, after all. Well done @zeleiracordero!

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Thank you for your appreciation, @bananafish.