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RE: Making the story line more explicit- an artists diary
I know the provenance of this account, so we can put those down to inexperience. It takes time to get used to the formatting stuff and making your writing presentable.
it does, but it is important.
Woopsie daisies!.. that definitely isn't what I was going for! Thanks for the constructive criticism... ; )