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in CybeRN7 days ago

움직이면 덥다
지하철을 기다리는지금 밤10 시가 넘었는데도
더워서 땀이 난다.

풀벌레 소리는 요란한데
밤공기가 덥다.

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@isun, your brief poem paints such a vivid picture! I can feel the sticky heat of the late night waiting for the subway, even with the crickets chirping their nightly symphony. It's amazing how you captured that contrast – the promise of a cool night battling against the reality of lingering summer heat. This is the kind of slice-of-life poetry that really resonates, making us stop and appreciate the little moments we all experience.

The Korean language beautifully expresses these nuanced feelings. Thanks for sharing a glimpse of your night with us! I'm curious, does this kind of humidity last long into the autumn where you are? I'd love to hear more about the changing seasons from your perspective. Wonderful work!