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RE: "Dear Dawne" Live Today! - Get A "Pro" To Check Out Your Blog (the line starts forming..3..2..1..NOW)

in #deardawne • 7 years ago

Thank you so much @davemccoy for all you are doing for the newbies. @goldendawne, it is a pleasure to have you, i will really appreciate if you can go through my blog and advice me accordingly. I want to know if there is anything i am doing wrong. Thank you.

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     7 years ago (edited)

    you are welcome Grace and congrats again! and I'm going through your blog now and will comment there! ;)

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you @Davemccoy, i saw your comment and advice, I appreciate everything.

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       7 years ago 

      Morning!!
      I visited your page and here are a few suggestions-

      • On your Love on the street post there is not much there for the reader to grasp. Meaning, explain what this program is all about. How did it get started? How did you become involved? Make the post personal for you and hopefully for the person reading. Engaging the person may result in comments, UPvotes and a new follower.
      • In your boarding school post you started to let your passion and fear come out. Maybe elaborate more in your next post. You had said in the post that there was more to come, but I didn't see another post about it. Also, be careful of spelling and using capital letters for "I" instead of lower case "i". Readers, especially seasoned steemians may find this an issue.
      • In your fruit post, centering the images and making sure they are sourced correctly is important. The sourcing could cause a copyright concern. See this post about formatting for some help. Also, next time maybe add some a personal touch about what your favorite fruits are and why.
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         7 years ago 

        Thank you @goldendawne , i really appreciate you taking your time to check out my blog. I will work on what you mentioned.

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