Your drawing of the anime character is beautifully rendered. Your care and interest are evident in the way you have used structure, shadows and outlines in each step. The shading of the hair and eyes in particular has brought the picture to life. Your efforts are truly commendable. However, I can give you some small suggestions if you want to present it more beautifully.

If you draw on completely white or light off-white paper, then each line and shading of the drawing will look clearer and more vivid. Also, when taking photographs, try to take pictures in a well-lit place so that the shadow of the phone does not fall and each part of the picture is clearly visible.

Taking care of these small things will further enhance the beauty of your artwork.