RESULTS: Let's Write Classifieds- Week 2

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Greetings, microwriters. It took me a couple of days to present the results for week 2. It was difficult; the quality, originality, and creative minds overwhelmed my mind.
I literally couldn't decide who to choose from among so many interesting entries. Well, without further delay, here are the results.

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Results

Summary of the Results

4 Countries: India, Nigeria, Peru, Venezuela
9 authors
7 valid entries.
18 classified ads

My impressions and highlights for each author:

📝 @lucymavarez: She describes two people who, it seems, have stuck to the stereotypes of romantic relationships. The adult child and the girl with a good figure as a calling card. An interesting combination.
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📝 @aplausos: In a crude and direct style, she portrays, in a mixture of irony and impudence, the resignation of two people who know what they want and how much it will cost to obtain it in the case of the girl, and through deception, hiding under the cloak of religion in the case of the man.
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📝 @enrisanti: In the description of her characters, she effectively incorporates physical characteristics that help us imagine them. Through her humor, she creates a discourse in which we must read the fine print very carefully before agreeing to go out with one of them. You made your characters very real, and we might even come to like their sincere impudence.
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📝 @venecineaudio: If the previous participant resorted to the physically tangible, it doesn't lead to the opposite side of the street. Characters who seem to be hiding something. Of the young rocker, in his eagerness to convince of his willingness to submit, I wonder if he's hiding fits of rage. And of the young woman, the descriptions of the place further reveal her state of mind. Good work.
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📝 @dove11: you hook us with subtlety, with humor, albeit biting, that dilutes the irony amidst so many explanations. His subtle characters, masters of deception, or of seduction with words? A master of what isn't said, but is read between the lines.
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📝 @hljott: You share a meticulous description of the expectations and conditions that the woman writing the classified ad places on her ideal partner. I wonder how many men would actually respond. Especially when they'd practically have to undergo a psychiatric evaluation or at least a beautifully terrifying personality test. The second-place finisher doesn't meet the requirements of the challenge. But it's incredibly interesting that this person is looking for someone to run errands.
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📝 @peachyladiva: You give us two beautiful texts with high poetic value. They overflow with honesty. I think your texts reflect not only the woman's search, but also what every man expects from his partner. You build your characters in such a way that you make them lovable. Great work.
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📝 @elcholitosanto: You gave us a pair of enjoyable texts; we immediately recognize that the person writing the ads is hiding something. But it still provokes us to keep reading. I like your ability to weave the stories of these two characters, whose self-esteem borders on marginality. And despite everything, you humanize them wonderfully. It's a shame you didn't comply with the rule of posting from this community. But I hope to see you in week 3.
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📝 @eudisdiaz: I surprised myself by how I let myself be lured in the first lines of the ad. Only to later discover the real intention behind the ad's initial offers. In contrast, the second ad convinced me, with its honesty and clear boundaries. You gave us two characters in search of a companion for their loneliness.
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Thank you all for rewarding us with your great display of creativity.


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WINNERS

This week, I had a hard time saying it, but I think everyone wrote very good mini-fiction pieces. Although some seem to have forgotten the word mini, in their announcement, permission was granted to write up to 300 words in full.
There were two posts that deserved to be among the top spots but didn't meet the fine print. I guided my selection of the winners based on how clearly I perceived the personality of the narrator in each announcement.

💥 🏆💱 Revealing the winner 💥 🏆💱

🥇 FIRST PLACE: @aplausos -- 5 SBI points

🥈 SECOND PLACE: @dove11 --- 5 SBI points

🥉THIRD PLACE: @enrisanti --- 5 SBI points

Note: All other participants also receive 2 SBI points, Thank you for everything
What is SBI?

Called @disconnect or @winwithsteemit, please assign a promo code for the Steemit Lottery to the winners @aplausos, @dove11, @enrisanti Thanks friend!


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Some statistics

👤 Author📝 Words💬 Comments
@lucymavarez
Link
Ads 1: 90 words
Ads 2: 61 words
TOT: 151 words
9
@aplausos
Link
Ads 1: 78 words
Ads 2: 81 words
TOT: 159 words
4
@enrisanti
Link
Ads 1: 125 words
Ads 2: 143 words
TOT: 268 words
9
@venecineaudio
Link
Ads 1: 145 words
Ads 2: 128 words
TOT: 273 words
11
@dove11
Link
Ads 1: 149 words
Ads 2: 149 words
TOT: 298 words
15
@hljott
Link
Ads 1: 156 words
Ads 2: 79 words
TOT: 235 words
11
@peachyladiva
Link
Ads 1: 127 words
Ads 2: 114 words
TOT: 241 words
21
@elcholitosanto
Link
Ads 1: 158 words
Ads 2: 135 words
TOT: 293 words
5
@eudisdiaz
Link
Ads 1: 163 words
Ads 2: 182 words
TOT: 345 words
3

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Thank you so much!
I appreciate this alot.

 last month 

As you said, it sure must have given you a tough time as I read almost all and had no hope for myself. I congratulate all the contenders and hope they will return for the current contest.

Congratulations!
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@damithudaya

Yeah, i read almost all and everybody gave their best.
Congratulations to all winners!
Well deserved!!!