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RE: Poetry Slam Week 9 - future

in #dsound7 years ago

The twisted knife goes deeper still and taints the blood that feeds it. Are we truly only creatures or beings with as yet unfolded beauty?

Very nice @amariespeaks, this goes beyond angst and really touches a chord on the darker side of the human experience.

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thank you @jbreheny - it is definitely one of my more darker pieces of writing, but it stands true.. hopefully the collective starts to wake up and we avoid this travesty.