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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope"
Hello @ mayberling, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You have started very well, Beside him, a kind-faced, dark-haired woman had her arm around his shoulders. Diego's heart leaped. He recognized that smile, those eyes... it was his mother." | 3/3 |
| Theme & Message: Your message of the story is clear, | 1.8/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Perfect | 2/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: At exactly 2:17, a car pulled into the parking lot. It wasn't the rusty blue sedan. It was a sleek, modern black car. A woman got out of the driver's seat. Her hair was now silver, but the shape of her face, the way she carried herself... Diego recognized her instantly. | 2.75/3 |
| Total | 9.55/10 |
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I wish you a great contest!
Hola amigo, muchas gracias por tu amable comentario y verificación. Bendiciones.