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RE: Desafío Steemit s26wk2 - Compañero de cuarto misterioso

in #ficcion-s26sem229 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.7/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.8/1
Total9/10

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  • I don't understand why the introduction process took place in the restaurant and not when Timothy agreed to accept him as his tenant.

  • I also failed to understand why Ronnie invited him to the restaurant when he was about to collect payment for his legal transaction!

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