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RE: Desafío Steemit s26wk2 - Compañero de cuarto misterioso

in #ficcion-s26sem22 months ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @anasuleidy, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Points left uncleared
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Okay
Presentation1/1Fine
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10

Feedback

  • Your story deviated from the prompt as you did not give any reason why Ronnie had all the tools in his bag!

  • If Timothy doubted his roommate why he allowed to stay him for so long? What stopped Ronnie to tell Timothy the truth rather than acting as an export import trader?

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