Hello @lovinah, thank you so much for taking part in Week 3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

Feedback
Story setting and world-building are good with a complete plot and suspense. You showed some effort in describing emotions and the search. To make reading easy, sentence structure and punctuation need to be improved. Keep practicing; you can improve your writing.