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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader
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Hello @okere-blessing, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building You started on a promising note and I was expecting a nice built up but the moment I read, "so he quickly swam into getting help as quick as possible." You know the prompt says the captain was missing with a boat. | 2/3 |
| Theme & Message The theme was rather weak since there was not much activity on t, as expected in the prompt.he part of crew and they did not talk to each other or planned accordingly | 1.25/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation I guess an extra image was not required (permitted 2). Planning and conversation between the crew was missing | 1.25/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness I am sure you could have done better than this with a little attention on contest prompt | 2/3 |
| Total | 6.5/10 |
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Looking forward to your next story in the coming week, all the best!
Thanks for the review, correction taken.