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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader
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Hello @neelofar, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: I guess your idea that the ship's crew reached a mysterious island is unique. They must have made a lot of effort to survive. | 2.5/3 |
| Theme & Message: You think the island had those odd dilapidated structures covered in verdant vegetation in the middle only or did they find any signs at the shore too? | 1.75/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Another surprising fact is that the island travels through space and time and some secret powers called them there. | 1.5/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: Unfortunate and sad Umar never returned although I was expecting he would come back with his newly found treasure. | 2.25/3 |
| Total | 8/10 |
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A nice use of the prompt. I wish you best for the contest!
Thank you Soo much respected for your feedback ❤️🥰