Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader

in #fiction-s24wk14 months ago

Hello dear friends today I am here to take part I am interested challenge Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader, fiction telling is not less than art now a days I am on it as my doll loved adventures and story.

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As the theme of the story is already provided and we have to fine disappeared leader.

The character of the story

  • Johnson Leader of cargo
  • roby Leader assistant
  • Nicolson crew helper

The story plot as the cargo was on voyage with 10 people and in the middle of the ocean different parts of ship stopped working everyone was worried to reach the nearby island so that they find the way to make it in working conditions.

The time was passing and night prevail in search of the best solution to reach nearby island in all circumstances but couldn't find any solution.

They were tired and fell to sleep when they awake what they saw Johnson was not in the ship and one of the boat was also missed, they called him and try to find in ship but no........

Everyone was worried how it can happened the leader missed without information and also the boat is missing what could be happened ant bad incident or something else.....

The roby said I woul take care rest of the people on the ship you people go and try to find the leader Johnson he might be in trouble as the signals are also not working for communicating.

She order Nicolson go and find him in the nearby forest or island we couldn't leave him alone he would be in trouble surely otherwise he never let us alone in this miserable conditions and also not shared his problem with anyone.

The Nicolson six sense was working more and he was cleaver mind person, he searched in all nearby forest and islands but unfortunately he couldn't fina any clue of his leader....

Suddenly he met a person and told his problem he said you must try to find your leader in narrow pathway of this forest it's mysterious places and famous for hidden treasures.

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I guess if your leader is brave man and also heard about this treasure I am sure he would be there because who has gone there never come back..... If you wanted to take risk you may go God will help you and might be you find your leader too......

Firstly Nicolson started thinking what to do but then he was loyal of his leader and moved towards narrow pathways. It was getting darker he was little frightened but moving on.......

He listens the voice of crying he focused the voice and reached the cave when he saw he was shocked Johnson was there he was badly injured and having a big treasures of diamond in front of him.....

The Nicolson was surprised to see all and was curious to know why it happened and how the Johnson reached here while leaving his all crew alone in trouble.....

The Johnson sorry for his mistakes and said I had heard about this treasure from my childhood and wanted to reach there when crew was in trouble I decided to find this treasure......

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Today I am successful and yeah sea is vast and it has a lot of reality like me o found the truth if the treasure and also successful.

Let's move to meet with rest of the crew surely they were worried, they reached the crew and when they saw their leader along with a lot of wealth everyone was happy.

They worked on the ship till it got functional and moved to their voyage with new happy blessed life.

End the lost leader was finally with crew he used his wisdom while using intellectual approach and prove that life has risks especially every successful pathway had a lot of difficulty but we can reached to our goal if we have determination for it.

It's all about my today post.

I would like to invite my friends @m-fdo, @mdkamran99 and @jannat12 to take part in the challenge.

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Excelente relato, @drhira me encantó cómo desarrollaste la trama del líder desaparecido y el giro inesperado con el tesoro escondido. La narrativa mantiene la intriga desde el principio hasta el final, y el mensaje sobre los riesgos y la determinación para alcanzar el éxito le da un toque inspirador. Los personajes están bien definidos, especialmente Nicolson, con su lealtad y valentía.✨

Muchas suerte.

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Hello @drhira, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building As expected you have made a good attempt to make a nice story based on the prompt. However, you have missed a couple of points we were expecting you to include in your story.1.5/3
Theme & Message Your story line is off the theme but your message is acceptable to some extent1/2
Formatting & Presentation1.5/2
Originality & Uniqueness2/3
Total6/10

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