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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Semana 2: Temporada 24 – El Sobre ".
Hello @strong56, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You have tried well but left couple of loopholes in your plot. For instance if it was a gang of robbers why were they coming at a fixed time? An exploitation to that would give the story a different twist. | 1.75/3 |
| Theme & Message: You have mentioned that the protagonist was an old gang member so why did he not get the idea as soon as he saw the reason of stalking? He should have an idea and opened the letter immediately rather than showing it to the supervisor or carrying it home. | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Okay | 1.75/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: | 2/3 |
| Total | 7/10 |
Feedback
You did a story that started well and you could have done better. Please keep up the good work. My best wishes.
Saludos amigo @dove11 muchas gracias por la verificación pero en el texto del sobre dice que la banda había estado buscando a Diego incansablemente hasta que dieron con su paradero
Estaré más pendiente para el próximo desafío