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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope"
Hello @ninapenda, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You have done a good job here but missed a crucial point, why that sedan approached the location at a fixed time every time. Inclusion of this point in your story made it better. | 2/3 |
| Theme & Message: A good theme but how come if Diego's father was the one in the sedan he did not recognize him instantly. Another point that needed your attention is how Diego reached to the conclusion his mother was dead? | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: You did well here. | 2/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: Your idea is original but little more imagination would have done wonders. | 2/3 |
| Total | 7.5/10 |
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All the best for this week's contest!
