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RE: " Wordsmiths Fiction Semana 2: Temporada 24 – El Sobre ".
Hello @tahispadron, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You made a great start but lost your way in the middle and forgot to reveal the secret of timing of the sedan. | 1.75/3 |
| Theme & Message: Your theme could be better if you would have revealed why the twins were separated or was she mother of Diego or what was the secret? | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Formatting is okay | 1.75/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: We are not looking for serials so why do think that your story will continue and reveal the secret in next? | 2/3 |
| Total | 7/10 |
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Honestly, I always expect a better story from you. Looking forward to next week, my best regards!
Gracias por la verificación.
La intención del final, fue cerrar con un poco de suspenso y originalidad.
Hasta la próxima semana, con una mucho mejor.
Saludos.
I really always expect a much better story from you being so talented in this art. My best regards!