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RE: Wordsmiths fiction week 2, Season 24: "The envelope."
Hello @jesusnunez, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You have selected the right theme but lost your way a bit in the middle. You have not mentioned why that sedan came at a fixed time and who was their target? | 2/3 |
| Theme & Message: I guess you could have done better if the purpose of killing the supervisor was more clear. | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Satisfactory | 1.5/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: You would have done better if concentrated on the prompt provided in the contest post but you strayed a bit and lost the flow. | 2.5/3 |
| Total | 7.5/10 |
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You started well but lost your way in the middle. I wish you a good contest.
Hola, gracias por la verificación amigo.
Si, al releerlo me doy cuenta que probablemente al final me faltó explicar algunas cosas, y también quizás me desvié un poco.
Gracias por sus acotaciones, intentaré hacerlo cada día mejor.
Saludos.
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