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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope"
Hello @max-pro, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: I guess your story began without a proper background, "There was no name at the bottom. Only the three letters R.H.K. were written. Diego's throat went dry." How did he know the envelop contained something undesirable and that too for him? | 2/3 |
| Theme & Message: The message of the plot does not convey the message since there is no idea how Diego could help the guy who died 5 years ago. | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It's okay | 1.5/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: The story has repetitive content in the lower part and ends abruptly. Your timing doesn't match with the timing of the prompt. | 2/3 |
| Total | 7/10 |
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I wish you a great contest in the coming weeks.
Thank you very much for observing my post and giving such a valuable review.