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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope
Hello @neelofar, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You have displayed good imagination in trying to relate with the prompt but the sequences you created left a void. | 2.25/3 |
| Theme & Message: I was just wondering the relevance of the locket in this story and importance of timing. A little more about that would have done wonders | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It is up to our expectation | 1.75/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: I felt like you left the story without giving us a a reason what Diego brother wanted to remind him by coming at a fixed time. Overall you started well but lost your way midway. | 2/3 |
| Total | 7.50/10 |
Feedback
You started well and a little more effort would have done this story wonders. My best wishes for this contest.
