Hello @cruzamilcar63, thank you so much for taking part in Week 2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

Feedback

• You stayed true to the original tone and structure of our provided story prompt. Your continuation reads as a natural and believable extension of the story. I don't have much else to add because you've done justice to our story prompt. I'll let the marks speak for themselves.