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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo"

in #fiction-s24wk33 months ago


Hello @rossnenye, thank you so much for taking part in Week-3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building: You have done well at this point when you say Crew members decided to look around to see if he could find a River to fetch drinking water because their water was almost exhausted.2/3
Theme & Message: I think you could have added a little suspense at this point before they found her in the compound.1.5/2
Formatting & Presentation:1.75/2
Originality & Uniqueness: I missed a little originality at this point but it was on expected lines.2.25/3
Total7.5/10

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Thanks for your review.