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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo”
Hello @almacaridad, thank you so much for taking part in Week-3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You started the story on a good note and with all the components which could have made a wonderful story but you lost your way in the middle. For instance, was it an electronic camera with a memory card or old styled film roll that when developed had just one photograph? | 2.25/3 |
| Theme & Message: The message is too complicated because it doesn't give a right picture for Nadeesha's disappearance. | 1.75/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: | 2/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: I guess with a little more effort this could well be a sensational story. | 2/3 |
| Total | 8/10 |
Feedback
You did well with the prompt but for a few lapses in the plot. My best regards!
