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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo
Hello @sameer07, thank you so much for taking part in Week-3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: To be very frank your story has a weak theme and seems like added scenes rater than a flowing fiction. | 1.75/3 |
| Theme & Message: Your theme has broken links and the message is not clear. | 1.5/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: | 1.5/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: I failed to understand whether Ria was a girl or boy because you have used different terms for this character at different points for instance "Riya did not hesitate. She had to go. But not as ready as they were". or "He packed smart: his GoPro, his DSLR, a red lanyard for the return, and a small pouch" | |
| Or "Riya never met her cousin's again, but in every picture he took after that day, Riya sometimes wondered if the same people behind the lens were now holding him instead." | 1.5/3 |
| Total | 6.25/10 |
Feedback
Unfortunately in Blockchain you can't change once you have entered something otherwise I would have asked you to make amends. Be careful next week. Thank you.
