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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo"

in #fiction-s24wk33 months ago (edited)


Hello @nishadi89, thank you so much for taking part in Week-3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building: Your story started on a good note and promising buildup.2.5/3
Theme & Message: As I said the message was interesting but A mummy is a dead human wrapped in chemicals and kept in a coffin, so this part weakened the story1.5/2
Formatting & Presentation: Your presentation is fine1.75/2
Originality & Uniqueness: I wish you tightened your story line a bit and ended it on a better note.2.5/3
Total8.25/10

Feedback
A nice story that could end at a better note.

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