Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo

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Hello there!

Greetings to you my friends. I am so excited to be writing on this amazing topic with you guys. Fictions are one of the best story lines which keeps the reader's mind engaged throughout The story after reading through the main post of this exercise, it caught my attention and I believe I can give a try and attempt to complete the fiction story.

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Nadeesha: The wildlife Photographer

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Now the search crew was Disturbed and on our way of where she lastly took the image. Added to this, the search crew were equally terrified of such a weird image captured on camera. This set fear in the mind of some of the search crew members. Worried of what they might encounter has the search continued, somewhere already at a disadvantage.

However the search did not end there. Instead her brothers were in charge of this search distributed search members in various channels of the forest in order that they could cover more ground. Their sister was so precious to them and she was the only girl in the family therefore they are not willing to let her go just like that.

Sticking onto the plan, the search group brought along equipment like walkie-talkie which could permits them to communicate among members so that no one gets missing in place of searching and missing girl.

*Soon afterwards night for approaches and the crew through their walkie-talkie give orders for everyone together at particular spot. At this point they spend the night there discussing a new tactics to intensify the search. Equality to keep the wildlife away and stay warm, they made a huge fire.

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Breaking morning, the crew were woken up by roaring sound of wolfs across the mountains. Finally everyone was up and they had a bit of a breakfast, some tea which they have preserved in in thermostat flask before leaving for this search. Again, they're redistributed as they previously did to cover more ground.

After searching for hours, the crew let by nadeesha's Brothers came across the same hut they found in the last picture caught on camera. Terrified, the crew stop for a moment. Thinking of what could be going on in there. As they move closer in quiet footsteps, they realized there was actually nobody inside this old abandoned Hut.

Her brothers, decide to have a closer look inside the Hut To be certain their sister is not hiding anywhere around there but immediately they touch and old Calabash and it fell down and break, they began to hurt. Weird sounds all over the place. It sounds so real just like in the horror movies. Everyone began to scream as they scatter through the forest

I stay run as fast as they could, the weird sound scattered over the forest and it appear to be coming from all directions. Of humans in the supernatural World. The sound they will make were, unmatching laughter, screams of people yelling : but they couldn't see anyone.

Voice 1: Hahaha. You are mine now
Voice 2: Help me please.....
Voice 3 : This is your home now.. hahaha
Voice 4: Babies crying....

Just as this crew try to escape through the forest, they finally came across a small path heading through a thick barrier of the forest. The trees here were so aligned as if there were a fence. In between the trees there was a small opening allowing the channel footpath to go through. As fast as they could run, they finally make it through the barrier and on the other side was a huge Savannah land with scattered buildings across. From here they could no longer hear the sounds again

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This place looks like it was a village but then everything was so abandoned, but terrified to go back to the forest, this this crew run towards these buildings. As they work across the land, they saw a tiny smoke coming out from one of the old abandoned buildings. As they inch closer to this abandoned building, it seemed as if someone was living there as they saw stops like white, red piece of cloth. And other stuffs that looks like magical tools.

While the crew is still outside, they could hear someone calling nadeesha's Brother name. Finally, you are here. Your sister have mentioned about you For the time she was here. She spoke of how good you are to her and she mentioned you will come looking for her even at every cost. She continued come in my son. Getting closer to the door, the crew saw in addition and an old witch.

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At first they were scared to approach her but then she said don't worry, everything is fine now. She showed everyone a place to sit and nadeesha run to her car brother. At this point, she narrates on how she narrowly Escape The walking Dead in the forest and ended up in in the village through the same path they took to arrive.

The crew was very tasty and the old lady offered them some water to drink and some bananas. As they eat, she then narrates the story behind the weird part of the forest they came across.

She mentioned that The Village was once blessed with abundance, food and nature. People live in harmony and happiness. Until one day A spirit from the forest came across multiple homes and transform a majority of the good people to evil ones.

The gods of the land had to do something about this. She. The old witch was the only one who was pure from the heart I'm so on the spirit did not attack her. From here the gods confined All the powers they could passed to her in a dream. She woke up the next morning and she discovered she was thinking different, acting different. She could hurt loud sounds far across miles away. She could also dictate evil ones With how magical powers.

The spirit that possessed the people living in this Village were so strong that in order to be cast out, they had to kill the host. And by so doing the spirit again their souls trapped in pain and suffering. She had no other choice but to do what she has to do and cast back the spirit back into the foreign land which is a part of the forest they just passed across.

They remaining people in the village decide to migrate to other neighboring villages in fear that the spirit might return. She planted special incarcinated trees which are going to act like barriers chopping the spirit in the portion of the forest. As she photo explain as the years go by the spirit grow weaker and weaker as they have not had a host to invade.

This does not hold the fact that they are still not dangerous, but then they could not possess someone as quickly as they did by the time they took over the Village. This is the reason why they were even chance to escape this. And not being caught. Perhaps she stands as the last guard between the forest and the rest of the village behind.

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She then she didn't narrated them a different route which they are going to take across the hills and get back to their town. She equally warned Nadeesha So stay away from this particular part of the forest as the same thing might happen again.

Finally she wished them goodbye an a safe journey back home. After walking for a whole day, the crew finally arrived down. Nadeesha's mum were so overwhelmed with Joy and crying telling her what she could imagine could have happened to her in the forest. The family reunited and that was the end of nadeesha's adventure.

It was an amazing fiction story and to I was amazed to continue it with my own creativity. I hope you do enjoy reading my story, and perhaps I will record a life to invite some persons to share their great creative Minds on this particular story.


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Credit to: @rafk


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Hello @rafk, thank you so much for taking part in Week-3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

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Story Setting & Word-Building: Your starting was fine but you added too many irrelevant sequences and terms which lessened the impact.1.5/3
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