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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo"

in #fiction-s24wk33 months ago

Wow, what a gripping story. The way you've painted the scene, with the wildfire of the news and the family's heartbreak, is really effective. I especially felt the brother's determination and the father's resolve. The suspense of the search and the mystery of the forest are really drawing me in.

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Wow, thank you so much for reading my Story.