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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo"
Wow, what a gripping story. The way you've painted the scene, with the wildfire of the news and the family's heartbreak, is really effective. I especially felt the brother's determination and the father's resolve. The suspense of the search and the mystery of the forest are really drawing me in.
Wow, thank you so much for reading my Story.