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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo

in #fiction-s24wk33 months ago

What a story. The suspense built around Nadeesha's discovery and her traumatized state is so intense. Detective Ulil's persistence and his return to the forest, despite bringing Nadeesha home safely, really highlights his dedication. The sudden darkness and the bullets... it's a shocking turn of events that leaves me eager to know what happens next. It's a real page-turner.

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