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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 4: Season 24 – The Family Secret"
Hello @mayberling, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & World-Building: You started well with the prompt and did everything to buildup a nice story | 1.75/3 |
| Theme & Message: Okay | 1.75/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: You slipped a little in the end | 1/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: Your text is original unique I got little lost as I could see no real purpose of the will and the deceased father's efforts. Was it all done to unite the family? | 2.75/3 |
| Total | 8.75/10 |
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A great story but a little more was expected in the end please..
Hola amiga buen día
Gracias por tu amable verificación y comentario, si mi idea en mi cabeza era esa, la unión de la familia, ese era mi mensaje quizás si me falto un poco de imaginación como mencionas al final cuando entran a la casa y no describir lo que descubrieron.
Espero mejorar para el próximo reto.
bendiciones.
I am sure you will, you are one of the best in this niche! Best regards!
Muchas gracias por el cumplido, Saludos!