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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 4: Season 24 – The Family Secret
Hello @peachyladiva, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & World-Building: You did a good job with the prompt provided. Had you started the story from the lawyer's office it would be even better. | 2.25/3 |
| Theme & Message: I read you loud and clear but for the initial built up | 1.75/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: I was forced to read every word, every dialogue but I missed the starting point. | 1.8/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: I will give it to you that you tried your best as I believe the conversation in fiction writing plays an important role. | 2.9/3 |
| Total | 8.7/10 |
Feedback
A good job, could be better if you had picked your story from the starting.
Thank you so much.