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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 4: Season 24 – The Family Secret"
Hello @sojib1996, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & World-Building: To be honest you missed a couple of points, 1-the will was sent to all three by the lawyer on the instruction his client so he should have known it. | 2/3 |
| Theme & Message: PO Box is not an address but a small box in the post office. You did not describe how the two siblings found Jeremy or how they reached his house. | 1.25/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Your images do not match the theme of the prompt | 1/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: It was okay | 2/3 |
| Total | 6.25/10 |
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We are looking forward to your next story in the 5th week. All the best.
