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RE: Wordsmith Fiction Week 4 : Season 24 - "The Family Secret"
Hello @daprado1999, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & World-Building: You started at a bright note but you forgot to mention the hint, the PO Box in the prompt which was the source of reaching Jeremy rather than digging him out of the wall. | 2.6/3 |
| Theme & Message: Your them was okay but for the way you searched the third heir. | 1.6/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: Okay | 1.7/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: The story has uniqueness but as I mentioned earlier you missed a couple of points like method of finding Jeremy. | 2.7/3 |
| Total | 8.6/10 |
Feedback
Well done with connecting Jeremy with the family but for the way you found him left the theme and end wanting a bit.
Regards to you sir, I appreciate your well structured review on my article. Im glad that my attempt was well appreciated. Thanks once again for stopping by...