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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Semana 4: Temporada 24 - El secreto de familia"
Hello @genomil, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You did well in the beginning with the expression and reaction in showing initial sentiments of Julie and how they approached their third heir listed in the will | 2.8/3 |
| Theme & Message: They went to the PO box address, supposedly there they would get Jeremy's address, according to the directions they should be there at 10 am, and found Jeremy himself. That sounds okay | 1.75/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: That's mostly up to our expectation. | 1.65/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: Your story idea is original but to be frank it deviated a bit in the middle when other characters took hold of the story but the end part saved it to a great extent. | 2.85/3 |
| Total | 9.05/10 |
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That was a great story. Let me admit if it wasn't for the complicated relations in the middle you were on the right track. My best regards.
Hola amigo, gracias por el apoyo y la evaluación.
Desarrollar el secreto familiar requería de otros personajes, que en mi opinión no le quitaron el rol protagónico a los hermanos y su herencia, realmente disfruté desarrollando la historia.
Gracias por motivarnos a dejar volar la imaginación.
Saludos, les deseo mucho éxito.
Most welcome! You know no one is perfect so we all commit mistakes and learn from them, me including. The joy of learning is always take the cake. I hope to see you next week with another tight story. Best regards!