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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Semana 4: Temporada 24 – El secreto familiar ".

in #fiction-s24wk43 months ago

Hello @ anasuleidy, thank you so much for taking part in Week-4 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building: You have created a beautiful story of love and hate. But the PO BOX do not provide owner's private address.2.75/3
Theme & Message: So none of them inherited the property as Julie died before giving her consent1.80/2
Formatting & Presentation: It's okay1.65/2
Originality & Uniqueness: Your story is unique and original and kept me hooked.2.80/3
Total9/10

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I thought Jeremy and Julie would agree to the will with their other brother but you gave it a different turn. My best regards.


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Muchísimas gracias por tu verificación y por tus palabras.
Saludos y bendiciones!!