Wordsmiths Fiction Week 4: The Family Secret | Steemit Challenge Season 24
Hello friends I hope you are great today I am here to take part in another interesting challenge Wordsmiths Fiction Week 4: The Family Secret | Steemit Challenge Season 24
The season is going just super I guess in the end I would be able to write mysterious stories for my doll as she really loved it.
The family secret
The Julie's mind was just stuck she started thinking the about the Jeremy, as she had broad wisdom's girl and curiosity in nature and already knew all about hidden secrets of the family.
Her mind was schoking to the core and she just wanted to knew what could be reason of hidden sibling why her father kept him in secret to till day what could be the matter behind.
She knew the nature of her father he didn't communicate with their children or wife despite of this fact Julie was a clever girl she always keen to knew what her father was doing and why he was silent all the time. He didn't let his children any questions, thousands questions raised in her mind.
Well!!!! Julie didn't wasted time anymore as she wanted to reach the depths of this matter, she was tracking the address which was given to her, she came to knew it was in hard to reach area but still fine she posted the letter on given address and decided to wait for the answer for further steps.
She cool down herself if her father has kept it secret there must be strong reason behind it but what it would be she was urge and waiting on........
A day came the door bell was ringing and she open the door postman was there with a letter, she hold the letter with frozen hands......
When she was opening many things moving in her mind what it would be my brother Jeremy whom I never knew......
Ohooo what he read her eyes were shining yeah I am ready to met with you came near the oak's tree in night time and no one should be with you just come alone.....
The night come near a cafe Oak tree Jeremy was coming to her what she saw he was just same to her same shiny eyes, curly hair just copy of Julie she was surprised to see him.
Julie asked why you were not with us he said dad had lost me in the forest on a stormy night and I couldn't get you people, dad told me he came every day to search me and one day he was successful in finding me.
The enemy trapped me and he didn't let me come back; our father tried hard but they said we will fire him if you told anyone about this place or your son, if you try to did any resistance. Yeah we will teach him hidden secrets of the art World.
Now, the person is no more who can stopped me I am ready to go with you, let's join family together and revive the principles and memories of dad he was great person and let me leave only in the risk but enabled me to learn new hidden World of art. I have a lot of knowledge let's explore it together.
It's all about my today's post.
I would like to invite @solperez, @fjjrg and @mdkamran99 to take part in the challenge.
Planteaste una historia interesante, pero sentí que faltaron elementos claves: el tercer hermano, la herencia y alguna explicación que nos permitiera comprender por qué el papá de Julie nunca habló de ese tercer hijo.
De todas maneras, creo que fuiste la primera en publicar, y cuando eso pasa, la valoración debe ser un tanto más flexible, ya que los demás aprenden de los errores de los otros, y así tienen más posibilidades de destacar.
Me encantó leerte. Un abrazo.