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Drudging up her strength, she headed for the address. It was some minutes past 4pm and she was tired already. Best get this done with. What could it hurt to arrive at Jeremy's front door and announce herself his long lost sister with a brother in tow. They'd split the inheritance and all would be on their way.
Finding the place was easy, but what she didn't expect was that it was an abandoned warehouse.

I want to believe you read this part sir/ma.

You asked us to take the story where our minds would go and I did just that. I also wrote that while she went in search of Jeremy at the warehouse, Jeremy came looking for her her. If that isn't a plot twist then, I don't know what is. The legitimate heir, suddenly realising they're not. Family secrets don't get deeper than that.

Please I'd ask that you review my write-up again and the assigned score @dove11 Thank you.