Greetings friend, thank you so much for your invite. I must say I really loved your story, the narrative, the suspense and all. You did a good job. Well done. But then, I couldn't help but noticed that you didn't source your images, like give the source to where you've gotten them from. If you could do that, it will be much better. Once again, good story telling, with the love and revenge, where love being the stronger power. All the best.