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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Semana 5: Temporada 24: El Pasajero Misterioso
Hello @paholags, thank you so much for taking part in Week-5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: That was a nice story with a lot of effort. I felt your story was more focused on geologist rather than the passenger. | 2.8/3 |
| Theme & Message: You have done a good job deputing an airport official following the mysterious passenger | 1.8/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It's okay | 1.8/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: Your story is is original and unique | 2.8/3 |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
Feedback
I guess a little more drama and suspense at the airport would do wonders to your story.
¡Holaaa amigo!🤗
Te agradezco la evaluación y las observaciones que le hiciste a mi publicación... Me encantó crear esta historia y, continuar fomentando en mí el hábito de la escritura creativa.
Un fuerte abrazo💚