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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger
Hello @sabbirakib, thank you so much for taking part in Week-5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You have created a very strong story with solid discussion between airport officer and the passenger | 2.8/3 |
| Theme & Message: You picked a great theme and the message is clear, the scam | 1.8/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It's okay | 1.8/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: I was expecting that you will reveal a great secret but what was a bit difficult to digest, "Why that intelligent and elite passenger chose to come from an unknown country which created doubt in the mind of airport officials?" | 2.8/3 |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
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Great story but a little slip in the end, best regards.
Thank you for your kind feedback. I ran out of words. Yes, I could include that. I am happy that my mark increasing weekly. Thanks to the team for giving me this kind of opportunity.