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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger
Hello @mememun, thank you so much for taking part in Week-5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building:You have tried well with a new angle of time travel which is commendable. | 2.7/3 |
| Theme & Message: Your theme is okay and message is clear although strays at certain points | 1.8/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It's okay | 1.8/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: You did well with a unique story. score better. | 2.8/3 |
| Total | 9.1/10 |
Feedback
The discussion part was missing in this story but it came as a narration otherwise you could. All the best!
Thank you so much dear friend for reviewing may post