Hello @cruzamilcar63, thank you so much for taking part in Week 5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

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Your story is very creative, especially in making the characters. It flows as if being controlled by someone else’s imagination. Formatting and presentation are okay. You have a high imagination.