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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger "
Hello @drhira, thank you so much for taking part in Week 5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & World-Building: | 2.5/3 |
| Theme & Message: | 1.52 |
| Formatting & Presentation: | 1/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: | 2/3 |
| Total | 7/10 |
Feedback
The story is creative. Setting and world-building are good. The theme is clear and in line with the contest theme. You could have scored more if you described the setting of the airport, the feelings of the officer, and the country the passenger came from. Overall, a very good attempt.
