Hello @ciru2014, thank you so much for taking part in Week 6 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

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A very imaginative story filled with a thrilling and mysterious world. The idea of meeting a robot version of the grandfather was very creative. Very powerful story with an attractive setting and a unique twist. If the emotions are clearer, the story will be strengthened. Your imagination is very deep; keep writing.