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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w1: The Office Project

in #fiction-s26wk13 days ago
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project

Dear @jannat7 Here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.75/3Okay
Presentation0.65/1Okay
My observation0.6Okay
Total8/10

Feedback

  • To be honest I was least expecting a fictional story starting with a long greetings etc yet having almost 75-80 words short than required to qualify. I am trying to figure out what technological multinational company doing with "Cyphonix Recharge" “Data Sentry” project. I thought Data security framework helps protect a project against cyber security and not charging the gaming consoles.
  • A project 15 years ago on cyber security that could predict future attacks on companies could be a great story but you missed on execution, conversation between team members and finally the focus on worldwide glory to the company. My best wishes for the contest!

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