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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1: The Office Project

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project

Dear @artist1111, Here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Great
Presentation1/1Okay
My observation1/1Okay
Total9.7/10

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  • So, Adeel, Sara Malik, and Bilal Ahmed completed Project Noor, an “energy management software” which was started in late 90s that revolutionize the energy industry.

  • I am surprised a mathematical algorithm with ability to predict future economic, political, and environmental accuracy was under process during that period in Asia when the use of computer had just begun.

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Thank you for reviewing and sharing your thoughts.

Yes, it is indeed surprising — and that’s partly why I built that twist into the story. After the 1990s, as computer adoption remained somewhat nascent in Asia, the specialist research groups and sometimes sponsored by the state activities were not necessarily decades behind civil technology.

The idea was to show how a groundbreaking you know algorithm could have been quietly developed, hidden from the public, and only revealed much later through the efforts of determined individuals like Adeel, Sara, & Bilal.