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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w1: The Office Project

in #fiction-s26wk12 days ago (edited)
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project

Dear @fortwis09, Here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Okay
Presentation09/1Overshot word limit
My observation1/1Okay
Total9.3/10

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  • They all agreed and began the experiment and they succeeded creating something unique but they weren't sure. They weren't sure because they were not qualified to carry out these experiments.
  • I know fiction allows us to go for such experiments but do you think the group of nurses would ever be given the credit? If you had given this chance to doctors of the hospital it would work better for the theme though. Great job, great story but hard to bring world-wide fame to the hospital.

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Thank you very much for your observations... I'll work on them next week.