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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project.
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project
Dear @wlin Here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | It was a great idea |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Original |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 1/1 | A great team work by hackers |
| Total | 9.8/10 |
Actually the hackers did all the teamwork on Dr. Carolds Burks' achievements and on her computer. It was a great team work even if unethical and for money.
The Twin Corporation was entitled for the benefits as they funded the Project but I wonder how they treated Nakary and Roman who had the data in their hidden USB. Did they snatch the drive or let them keep the money or they took everything back?
Greetings @dove11.
When writing the end of the story, I wanted to leave the fate of the hackers unknown, thinking about the Thriller effect of the story; and of course, also to maybe expand it in the future. I feel that 800 words limited me a bit in the development and ending, but that was part of the demands and the challenge that I gladly accepted when I read the contest announcement.
Thank you for your appreciation and evaluation of my story. I will be attentive to the new call for entries.