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RE: Desafío Steemit s26wk1: El Proyecto de Oficina

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project

Dear @paholags, Here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation1/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.6/10

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  • I guess Corina's grandpa found a perfect formula for treatment of cancer with right combination of chemicals but could not make a mixing machine! This angle seems a little weak to me.

  • If you had brought that world-wide fame angle for the team it would have given your story a little more ground.

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Mil gracias por tu evaluación... Para las próximas ediciones, tendré en cuenta tu observación. Te envío un fuerte abrazo💚