Your story pulled me in right from the quiet discovery of the “Solar Atlas 2004” folder. I loved how you wove Tunisian heritage into the plot; the way pottery and minerals tied into cutting-edge technology felt both authentic and magical. The scene where the cracked prototype revealed a hidden strength was such a satisfying twist; I honestly didn’t see that coming, and it made the breakthrough feel earned rather than easy.

What really worked was your vivid sense of place, the medina streets, the lab filled with the scent of hot clay, and the symbolic mosaic box at the expo all grounded the fictional project in real cultural roots. It gave the story emotional weight and national pride that I could feel through the page.

If there’s one thing I think could be explored even more, it would be the tension with the foreign energy companies. You hinted at powerful external forces that once shut this down, and diving deeper into that pressure could have raised the stakes and added more suspense before the big reveal. Still, the resolution was uplifting, and I loved how the story closed with the folder displayed proudly; it made the whole journey feel like a victory not just for the characters, but for Tunisia itself.